good poem...your a good writer keep up the good work...~sherrie~

OMG! SO SAD!!!! Great climax pint on such a trajic sad story! I hope you are on! Wishing you better luck!
luv kt

wow... that was so sad. i hope that didn't really happen. it was written really good, i enjoyed it till the end, keep writing xxxx

once again, very beautiful and moving. you are an awesome writer!!
hope your dreams come true!!
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

As always...you have here a great poem, that moved me so much! Thanks for your comments by the way!
Never stop writing, or else (jk).

Awww very good! 5/5 Keep it up!

much love
savannah

Wow, powerful writing, I've read the previous two poems about your brother too. I am really sorry for what you are going through. These poems convey your emotions, they are just heart-wrenching, and they have broughten tears to my eyes. Keep up the great work!