Comments : You

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Awwwww!!!!!! Omg, sooooooooooooooooooo good!!!! *Applaud* BRAVO! lol! Seriously, this made me wanna cry! lol! Great job!

  • 19 years ago

    by shenoa

    thats so sad, i know how you feel

  • 18 years ago

    by Katran

    hey, gr8 poem. dnt let anyone get ur down, coz ur betta of without them.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    Aww this is so sad. and so good. i can relate well to this.
    thank you for your comment. i appreciate it a lot.
    good poem again
    lauren

    ((you're in my favorites XD))

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    5/5. You were already on my faves list, b/c I really enjoy your stuff! Good work!
    Kris
    BTW, I've already given you a nickname in my head. You're Jakey. Nope, you don't have a choice! lol!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I think some stanza's had the impact taken away from them such as: you kill me and torture me. The two me's steal from each other as well as always writing but you'll never know it.

    Word choice is important :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Sole

    Interesting . . . can't really say I liked it all that much - but each critic has their own individual opinion. . . The flow was good, except for the second line - take off the though from the end perhaps? And the structure was good, even with the repeated lines which took the power from the poem.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 16 years ago

    by xjessx

    I think that this is my favourite poem by you. or at least one of them. I've said this a couple of times, but you really do have a way with words. keep writing!