Aww. :( I'm sorry, hun. I hope everything has gotten better though. Great job! :)

lol you tink it's bad but i think it's really good funny how most poets think that they are bad but lots of people end up loving them in the end!
thanks so much for commenting on my poems take care

~lil slam~

great poem! i love it! i've been feeling the same way too! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

It wasn't bad, in fact, I really like this. You express yourself very well. I'm sorry that you always feel such pain though.

that was an awesome poem, so deep and sad. i hope you're feeling better, take care :) xxxx

It's soooooo good...lol...luv ya!!
5/5

Luv,
Noziyna

beautiful. im really sorry u feel this way, you deserve so much better, although i don't know u. anyways, great write and keep it up!
Fighter
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Sad and so touching. I hope you feel better. Take Care lol

Touching and really good. It's not as bad as you claimed.

I don't think it's bad at all, just maybe the rhymes a little bit forced. good job though! Nice pattern.

I think I'm commenting while your on, I really enjoy reading your poems, Its good to have things to relate to, Thanx for the comments, I like reading peoples opinions on my work, keep it up, love katie! xx

You represent futility so well in this poem. Your ability to express emotion is breathtaking sometimes.

I thought the first stanza's rhyme of you and flu sounded a bit forced, but it works all the same and if it really was the case then it's actually quite good! Strange eh?

I'll read some more soon.

Bert