beautiful. this is one of my fav poems ever! great job.
Fighter
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this is really good if u need to talk im here

JACOB ^_^ i love you! you're such a great guy n i'm always here for you too hun, you know that ^_^ this is the only poem i've read sofar cuz i just got home n have alota other stuff to respond to but it's amazing hun, you're a great writer^_^

take care dude =P

Weird...but cool. well done 5/5

O0o0 that was like... w0w. I liked it a lot! **claps** Well keep it up!!

~*~Elisha~*~

This Poem was very interesting..I like how you compared suicide to the help of a lady...a very unique way of discribing something as tragic a that...Good Job..Joc

OMG! I can see why there have been 10 votes and it's still a 5! This is WONDERFUL! I can't WAIT to read more of your stuff. You're now on my favorites list! Congrats! lol!

This one gave me chills at the end. i havent come across a poem that descibed sucicide like this, yet, great job.5/5

This is really beautiful...