again wow, your write so good, you really make me feel like i'm living it. it helps to know i'm not alone, hugs n love-hayley- oh yah if you get the chance plz comment on some of my poems.!

Very nice job! Well written. Nice flow also. You have hreat talent. Keep it up!

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WOW.....so very dark and powerful. this shows some real talent, 5/5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Awesome! Definately a dark poem, lol. I love the concept that its "something" but its not really known what it is. One of my songs is similar. Keep it up! Take care!
-Conner

Good poem really long but worth da readin like it i give it a 5

wow!! that was great!! well written!! it flowed great and there is nothing wrong!! great job!! keep it up!! :)

WOW!!!! Oh my God, this is such a great poem! I am truly lost for words...
Keep up this great work and I'm adding you to my favorites! ;)

Love,
Tiff

Great poem! It is wonderful!

it's not everyday that you hear the knife's perspective of suicide. you did a really good job. Keep writing ^^

wow, that was so good i actually read it 3 times. and that knife kinda reminded me of my ex...but yeah anywayz, it was just a really really good poem! 5/5!

I have nothing to say but that was so brutally good that i am just grinning from ear to ear that was excellent!!! A 5 without a doubt!!!

love it!:)

That was one of the best poems i've ever read! that was soo good! All of your poems are good, you should keep writing

Wow that was gr8, so true 2. i can totally relate

Excellente'!
this was unreal, brilliant poem keep up the good work. =)

I love this poem soo much, its so powerful and meaningful. i enjoyed reading it very much! =)