this poem wus so good, i really can relate, the words were wisley chosen and it flows very well, great job
this stanza really caught my attention.. Great work
Samzxox

Lying on my bed,
Staring into space,
I'm fading to another time,
Thinking of another place;

good poem with cute rhyme. write on :)

I liked this... it was good... Gave it 5... Keep writing