Comments : Pretend

  • 19 years ago

    by broken angel

    "I'm sick of always having to pretend,
    And I wish that this would just come to an end.
    And I'm so sick of all this strife,
    But for now, I'll just have to move on with my life.

    Because I’m growing up in this life pretending nothing's to hate,
    And that I’m so perfect and so free.
    Pretending nothings changed and I still have fate,
    Pretending to be someone else, so that no one can see."

    What the h.ell? Were you like reading my mind girl? Cause that is exactly what I feel like every day! Amazing! I'm Breathless! Speechless! In Utter Awe! U are so cool!

    Thanx again for commenting, means a lot!

  • 19 years ago

    by B4BY BLU3 X

    Hey there, loving this poem, its realy good. You have some talent. It is so brilliant the way you made everything rhyme so well. Well done and I hope you keep it up. And as for pretending to be someone you're not...I don't think you should worry about it s much. You should just be yourself because at the end of the day, if you are pretending to be someone you're not then that means your friends don't actually like you...They like the person you are pretending to be. Do you really want to go on living life with the people around you, only liking you for what you are ttrying to be rather than the person you actually are? Think about it, best of luck babes, sorry to hear you feel this way. Please check out some of my depression poems somtime when you get the chance. Hope this helps a little. Take care and keep ya head up.
    ~Love always~
    xemmax

  • 19 years ago

    by B4BY BLU3 X

    Hey there, loving this poem, its realy good. You have some talent. It is so brilliant the way you made everything rhyme so well. Well done and I hope you keep it up. And as for pretending to be someone you're not...I don't think you should worry about it s much. You should just be yourself because at the end of the day, if you are pretending to be someone you're not then that means your friends don't actually like you...They like the person you are pretending to be. Do you really want to go on living life with the people around you, only liking you for what you are ttrying to be rather than the person you actually are? Think about it, best of luck babes, sorry to hear you feel this way. Please check out some of my depression poems somtime when you get the chance. Hope this helps a little. Take care and keep ya head up.
    ~Love always~
    xemmax