Nicely done! t'was a very good poem.

-Church

well chris, that was really good. i have to admit it was. dont fell bad about that, its what really happened. keep on writin, i luv reading ur stuff

Great poem, and thank you for commenting on mine, means a lot to me....I think I'll check out some of your other poems....

Kalika

thats really good keep up the awesome work!!
~Hard2Heal