I like the way youve written it but content is very sad . I know how u feel id feel the same if anyone did anything to my little brother . Well done love Kathryn xx

great heart touching poem! PLP

~lil slam~

This is so lovely it showed how much you love your little brother, his pain is your pain, i am glad all is well now,
Take care
Doreen.

that was awesome!!! it flowed soo beautifuly!!! keep it up! <3

xoxo
Aubs

I hate bullies. I got bullied alot for being small and nobody ever noticed. Such a sad poem but great. :)

sooo good =) 5/5.. very well-written.. keep it up.. hugs from September

sooo good =) I voted a 5 for this one.. very well-written! keep up the awsome job! please check out my poem "blood on my bathroom floor" it would mean so much to me =) hugs

this is a pretty good poem....very expressive....I have 2 little brothers also, so I know how this feels...lol, we'd do anything to protect those cuties!

very nice. keep it up. 5/5

awww...that was a sweet poem...I'm glad he's not picked on anymore, that is one of the worst things.....great poem....

Kalika

great, what else is there to say? You can really write!

I adored the ending of this one! nice work!

Awww how sweet.
another wonderful poem ^.^

Very touching. I like your work.

I loved the idea behind this it's really awesome to see you caring so much about your little brother i mean i would too but still its touching lol, im very glad that you got it to stop, i know what it's like to be bullied so yeah it's hard so good job. as for the poem the flow is choppy and sometimes you tried to rhyme words that just don't rhyme like anybody and moody and monsters and faster and there's a lot more, but yeah imma give this a 4/5 loved the idea lots, but your flow was choppy and the rhyming was off