Perfect poem for a broken heart...A poem i could relate to so much...i don;t think it is bad...thanx for writing this one,buddy...take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

i like it but you have some interesting rymes eg love and dove lol hehe its awsome >>5/5<<
bec xXx

blah...where to start...im sorry..i really am...forever..i love you..i do...more then him...i will leave him then...if this hurts that much, i will leave him, im sorry i said yes to him. i love you..i do...im sorry so much...i love you

-Mortalidga
xxTakeCarexx

ps..awesome write...made me cry a bit...touching <3

good job. neatly written poem. you are a good writer :)

take care, 5! always believe in love.

vote for my poem knock knock! nidhi has come. thnx