Great job...If I remember correctly I have read a few of your other poems, they are all great. Awesome job!! MuchLoveJJ

I like the theme, but it somehow seems that better wording could have been used in a few places. Good job though!

That is so sad and strong! Really pewerful!! Keep it up!
luv kt

wonderful poem! i absolutely love it!

This is a realy good poem, I can toataly relate to how you feel, there are people out there who I love so so much and I have had to see them with other people and it realy realy hurts. Keep up the good work!

Thank you so much for the comment everyone!!! =)

Thank you so much for the comment everyone!!! =)

I know just how u feel! I read ur poems and they remind me of myself. Good job! Keep writing!

hey....it was verry good! keep it up...i gave it a 5/5

-amanda