Wow, this came across as more of a prayer then anything, i think it is an amazing peice of poetry and should get no less then a five..then again i am always giving out fives unless it is a REALLY bad poem, this is the exact opposite of that.

I think that this is an amazing poem and you should keep up the good work.

Five/Five

P.S. hank you for your comment on my poem, every comment i get on that poem is good, there are two poems that i have featured that mean a lot to me, that one i IMMEDIATELY put up on my featured list. Sorry it took so long to respond i am trying to get back to everyone who has commented on my poems...it is taking a while cause i get new ones everyday i check it. If you keep commenting back and forth then i will add you to my favorites.

That's incredible. You kind of expect wht is going on in the poem and yet even so its so intriguing and almost surprising. So well done! Thnkyou very much for your comments and thankyou fro making me a favourite, Its much appreciated...thankyou.

Jemma.

Great writing, keep it up bubz

x0x0

Hey everyone! thanks for the comments/help,(lol)! I really need them and like it when someone tells me how to fix it...Don't be scared to share what you think would make this poem even just a little better... I have an open mind about all my poems!

Lots of Love
Kristen

Hey everyone! thanks for the comments/help,(lol)! I really need them and like it when someone tells me how to fix it...Don't be scared to share what you think would make this poem even just a little better... I have an open mind about all my poems!

Lots of Love
Kristen

thank you for the comment. i gave you five yay! i really like your poem a lot

original

great poem sry it took me so long
to comment back I've been trying to make
a new poem but theres been some writers block

but really this poem is awsome keep it up
5/5

Perfectly written. I loved the rhyming and the words.
Jordan-Paige

hey love the poem its so true