thanks guys but i dont have anyone special....at the moment!! :) actually my friend asked me to write something for her bf!! so i gave it a shot and this is what i came up with!! thanks for the comments i will check yours out too!! :) take care.

hey gurl i really enjoyed readin ur poem itz so sweet keep up tha gud work!!!!!

Great poem girly! keep up the good work! your doin great, can't wait to check out more of ur poems! try and check out soem of my new ones, if you already haven't and thanks for the comments on the ones u did check out!
lots love-
XOXO-Holly

thanks sierra, i would comment on your poem but you dont have any!! i really appreciate the comments from everyone thanks!! :)

this is beautyful sweet! i love it, good job, 5/5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Oh sweeet subject to talk about it ! and i enjoyed the writing it brought up a smile"Coz Love is the Best thing to talk about" : )

this part was soo cute :

I love it when I here your name,
you make me hot like burning flame

i was like oH lol,so cute

Keep it up,
Peace,
Darla