I luv it... keep writing
~M

is this another song?
i feel so bad reading other people's poetry, i feel as though i am looking into their darkest feelings. i hope that you haven't gone through such pain, but you put it ever so beautifully into words if you have, and if you haven't you capture the feelings that i know happen in that situation

wow loved it keep on writing hope you have fun

This gave me chills! You convey sorrow and despair so eloquently in this! Pure brilliance~Holly