couldn't quite understand it..but the concept looked good.

wow,
im so sorry your best friend ended her life cause she thought her dreams would never pull through, theres tough feelings in that poem and it made me cry, keep up the good work i gave u a 5/5! email me if you want

love,
angel

i love it it makes me want to cry a little bit but its awesome. keep up the good work

aw... that poem was so sad.... but the ending kinda threw me off there.. did it mean that their spirit was still with you, or were they physicaly there? great pome nontheless!! keep it up!

haha her spirit was still there i meant

wow that is i great poem! its so sad! keep up the awesome work!!

-jenn

wow. why would you think you aren't a good writer!

Oh no.. this happend to me too.... it really sucks.. i feel your pain :(

Awww... that was so sad, but a great poem nevertheless. Keep your head up high and take care!

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im so sorry bout your best friend, i think shed have been so proud to read this, keep it up u hav so much talent xx

wow i thought that was a really good poem, and im so sorry for your friend. but i thought the poem was excellent

xxx

Great, 5, really sad, take care

I loved this. I put you on my favorites. Keep it up. 5/5

wonderful poem!

YOU REALY HAVE A GREAT WAY OF EXPRESSING YOURSELF...5/5
MUCH LOVE
~*~HEATHER~*~

hehe, i've read and commented on this one too....this poem is really good though!

sad sad poem...but so so good...Sherrie

like it. actually love it. keep it up. you have what it takes~!!!~

thanks for reading my poems. it means a lot to me. thanks again~!!~

it was a pretty good poem, the letter added a nice touch

What can I say? Another good and very original poem. I liked the way the poem doens't go on and on how you felt it describes the "setting"more if you know what i mean. Very beautiful, keep on writing. take care.
SatuzKa