beautiful and very well written :) correct one spelling mistake in last line, *everyday* instead of *everyda* u write very well :)

take care, 5! always believe in love

dont forget to vote for my poem knock knock! nidhi has come, if u didnt vote already!

♥ amit ♥

You have an amazing way of writing and i can so relate my g/f just broke up with me and it hurts you obviously love her alot and i hope things work out with you two. I hope she knows she lucky to have someone like you.

strikes me in the heart!!!...thanks for this wonderful poem!....^_^

very well done! exellent poem very emotinal and vry good! i enjoyed it imensly

Yea this poem is very nice... i know exactly how you feel here...
its sad... but always keep ur head up!