Honestly It was great. You have potential and I really like the way you write. Great work!!! =) 5/5

Good poem. Although my favorite is "Here I Am". But keep up the good work. :)

Not one of your best, but still awesome. Great job, keep it up! as always

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That was great... 5 for sure

Awesome work ! .. I Loved it !!

great ending.i loved it 5/5.it was very deep and that's the kind of poems i like.keep up the good work

good question? seemingly profound questions

One suggestion where it says come i think it should be came but idk good job
-Ladu jaz

I like the way you stepped out of the box and asked yourself those wuestions. Good job!

5 stars! very well-written.. higs

another 5/5! keep it up!

take care,
much love,
Shannon

5/5