GREAT POEM!!! A lot of emotion into it..I liked that..A definate 5 plus! If you have time please comment on my poems also..

-Dawn-

Really great poem!! It was so weird tho, cuz as i was reading the 1st like...3-4 stanzas, i was like, "Hey, look, somebody is writing abt whats just been happening to me." I know what ya going through, and ive been there a lot, my whole life, and im there once again. My best friend of 3 years, is dropping our friendship, but not in quite so many words. See, she doesnt realize she is cuz she doesnt know how much shes hurting me. But anywaz....GREAT POEM!! Way to express your true feelings. I hope it made you feel a LIL better once you wrote it down. Take good care of yourself, and GoD Bless!!
*~Seany~*

hey this is a really good poem! it sux tho that ppl usually get thier best or really good poems from something that hurt them. keep writing cuz ur good! better than me!!!!lol

i believe that sean's comment was most vidal and truthful out of them all but to get on to my comment..ive never heard a poem that well written on that topic.its hard for me to write that much on a specific topic such as yours....and so good. i liked the poem though to the fullest and ive been going through that too with a friend of 5 years..it gets harder and harder...but i continue to pursue my dreams of the friendship that we used to have. thank you for the inspiring words and i hope it gets better..we all experience it your not alone. keep rockin the poems
-danny

i know i just commented..but you live in colorado..thats rad..i do too in aurora..we should talk sometime..my email is tonic_jesus_skater@yahoo.com..ttyl
-danny

hey there! wow you've done it again! I really loved this poem. keep on writing cause I'm enjoying reading it all. xox

that was something i really needed to hear.My friend andi got into it and i feel the exact same way.I liked the way you expressed it ,it was a way that i never could.Try and read some of my stuff maybe you will like it.

WoW:'( It feels like I wrote this, all my feelings were all said in this poem..I just lost a best friend because she was someone totally different from what I thought she was...At any rate..Great poem! Please stay strong! 5outta5
Keep it up:o)
Shannon

Great poem!! I know what your feeling. I lost my best friend and she meant the world to me and when I read this poem it really touched me. You have a good way with words, keep writing. Definitly a 5. Take Care
Lanie

Wow ur poem is so good! it's written really well....your a reallly good writer...

There is one word that can really tell what I think about this poem. BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!

hey rachel its danny..the colorado danny i was just passing by yesh i live in aurora..but i go to thorton sometimes cause i have peeps up there..but ill talk to you sometime later..email me..sometime

i think your poem was truly amazing and you really showed how you felt about your so called 'friend.' your use of words were so strong yet emotional which gets me thinking about life and what ppl can do to you. a lot of ppl say 'i no wat ur going thru' wich is tru bcoz things happen 2 every1 at all times but u seemed so serious and honest in your poem, i dont think any1 can rele understnd how much this 'friend' has changed your life. but it was a brilliant and beautiful poem. well done, take care, luv lucy x

Amazing, because exactly how i feel after this past weekend... where my best friend and i fought over nothing. and she hurt me ... thank you for this... keep up the great work!