I loved you

by emily manica   Feb 15, 2005


Why do you cry
you asked me that day
all i could say was that i
wanted you to stay.
you said mamita don't cry ill be back and ill tell you why.
you see Emily i do love you so but for some reasons i have to go
i know ill miss you every night
and you i know will cry with all your might
i know you don't understand but soon you'll see that what i did was right.
so baby i love you and have a good night

please comment i would really like to know if you dont like it so i can change it if you do please comment also
than you

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  • 19 years ago

    by elizabeth

    it was cute, but you kept changing rhyme schemes, try to stick with jsut one next time. keep up the good work and thanxs for posting on my poem "a soldiers love" God Bless

  • 19 years ago

    by miiss lala

    good job that was cute! xox

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