nice poem. very well written. heartfelt emotions, keep wiriting :) you'll do better in no time!

take care, 5! always believe in love

dont forget to vote for my poem 50 reasons why i love you!

♥ amit ♥

dont beat yourself up. its a good poem. Keep it up. 5's 2 u

ayna this is a beautiful poem! Your poems are always written so beautifully sometimes they make me want to cry! this poem and none of your other ones have sucked, they are all awesome. you are such a talented writer and i love you...always and forever, and i'm always here for you!
cause u are so beautiful to me! lol k i wuv uuuuuuu!!! mmmkkaaayyy!? k-bye

this was great. 5/5.... thanks for commenting and voting on my poems. it means a lot... keep writing... you rock! xoxo

Great poem! I can totally relate and i have been there! You expressed your feeling really well! Thank you for commenting on my poems; it means a lot to me! Great job and keep up the good work!
~ Marianna

Luv it so much like my ex we broke up yeaterday.
plz read and comment on sum of mine

Well done dear!!!!
i liked it so much...... these questions are very true and genuine..
good work........5/5

Bharti