Bit simple really. Shows alot of emotion though. Well done.
Take care of yourself.
ALl my love,
Laura.

so simple yet so true i like it a lot catherine keep up the good work
luv always
Janice xoxox

uh yea kim he did cheat on me

Short but well written u really did a great job. Did this guy cheated u? Oh and can u plz comment on my new poem titled My Story thanks!!!=)

Good job! I can relate...

Short and simple. I like it. Keep it up. Take care!
-Conner

SHORT BUT SWEET.... IS THAT TRUE? ANYWAYS I GIVE YOU A 5/5....
MUCH LOVE
~*~HEATHER~*~

It's short, it rhymes, it's to the point what more could I ask for. Shorter poems are cool because I get tired of reading things that are long like halfway through. Your other poems are great too, keep up the good work!

Short and in the moment of feeling. While there is very little art in dancing around and describing your personal feelings about the point, it is direct and there is feeling embedded within. I hope things have turned out ok.