Excellent job! It was written very beautifully. I gave it a 5. keep writing..you got talent.
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Wow, it sounds exactly like my friends! lol great job and keep it up! 5/5

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thats was realy good it flowed realy smoothly
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just wonderful poem. i luv your poems.

thank you guys for the comments...they are greatly appreciated!! keep up your great work!! take care..peace and love♥.