awwwwwwwwwwww this poem it gr8 good job keep it up luv rach

dont give in its not that good on the other side

This poem is so good but I'm sorry that happened to your mom. Keep your head up. Sometimes I feel like my mom is dead even though she isn't. But she's never around..

Im sorry about your mom.But you did a great job on the poem

Wow, excellent poem, I am so sorry you lost your mum, but just remember, I'm sure she would want you to carry on and be as happy as possible, keep up the beautiful work xxx

WOW that was an amazing poem!!! Sorry bout your mom, I hope you feel better, be strong and I hope life treats you better then it has!! Loved the poem your very talented!!
Peace and love
Tash
xoxox

david as ur best friend and ur most trusted brother ur loss would be the worst thing to me and with that......... the words of every line and every letter of every word u typed is a blessing to all the readers.... i love u like a brother......stay with us......

Thanks jeremy... that is appreciated even thought your in the same room as me... isnt it akward how i always wanna die... i apoligize if i slip away... i will try my hardest to survivie this chaotic world and all the horrible things we all go through... i am here for you until the end... and i love you like a brother