Comments : You Need to Change

  • 15 years ago

    by oOXkonnXOo

    ooh thats a great poem.. i can really feel what your talking about. love it!

  • 15 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    Awesome poem! :) Look forward to reading others by you.

  • 15 years ago

    by UM

    Wow...very nice. Is this based on true events?

  • 15 years ago

    by *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    so touching, and sad. this isn't an easy subject to write about and truly express the feeling acurately. of loving someone so much you have to let go. good job.
    *~*Soldier Lover*~*

  • 15 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    A great write, keep up the good work

    Eirisa

  • 15 years ago

    by SweetDreamer

    Awesome poem. You wrote it very sincerely and it seemed to be filled with emotion. I'd definitely read this 1 twice! lol. Nice work. If you have time, vote or comment on some of mine, thx.

  • 15 years ago

    by miiss lala

    that was so awesome! great job keep it up! xox

  • 15 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    Very nice! I like this part...
    You need to change
    and love yourself
    before you love me
    or anyone else
    Good job! Keep writing!!!
    Love Always,
    Angel

  • 15 years ago

    by yo yo yo

    i really like the poem it was great.. guyz can be such asses sometimes... well i loved the poem i gave it a 5 keep up the great work... and plz vote and comment on some of my poems.. byee

  • 15 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    This is a really great poem! A lot of emotion. I can relate to a lot of it! 5/5.

    Check out some of mine plz..

    Love,
    Tiff

  • 15 years ago

    by christina

    wow i loved it ........ i can feel the pain in this poem very gooood :D
    peace

  • 15 years ago

    by Jomar Bautista

    Well written. Great work!!! =) 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Krystal Ross

    aww this is cute, keep up the good work i hope to read more from you in the future, 5 outa 5 keep in touch

  • 15 years ago

    by happy days

    wow, i loved you rpoem, u have so much talent, keep it up xxxx

  • 15 years ago

    by polly

    good poem, it had a really good flow, of rhymes and your feelings.
    polly

  • 15 years ago

    by Mexxy

    gj luved it 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Mexxy

    gj luved it 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Mexxy

    gj

  • 15 years ago

    by -Kristy-

    THIS IS SOOO GOOD! I love It!!!!!!
    Keep it up.

  • 15 years ago

    by dragonfly

    Being broken hearted sucks!