this is an excelent poem!! i really like the metaphone, it seem to fit perfectly! keep up the great work you have a lot of talent!

-jenn

nicely done....I really liked it. It made you think about life and all the craziness of it. I thought it was deep. Good job.

cute, inspirational poem! 5.0

Really good poem, I like it. Very deep. Well done, keep it up and thanks for commenting on my poem xx

That's great, at first I didn't like it, but then I read it again and loved it, lol. Great job!

GREAT POEM, I LIKED IT A LOT... I GIVE YOU A 5/5

nicely writen! nice flow!!! 8/5

i live northeast!..where does he live?

I like this piece very much. It is very true in so many aspects. You seem much older than 15. Make sure to follow your own advice here, its good stuff.

Wow, beautiful! You have a lot of imagination, and I really loved this poem because it's so different from other poems and so creative. And it's really honest too! What can I say? 5/5 for this poem, I loved it, u have a lot of talent!
SatuzKa
p.s Actually no I'm not Italian :D hehe

this was very heart felt but seemed more like a essay rather then a poem read Pride or Profit you will see the difference and tell me what you think