Not bad at all. I really liked this one. Very nicely written. Kudos.

Awsome poem!!! Love every part!!!

~much much better than the other i read!~

The flow, the structure, the words were strung together so well! I hold a lot of relation to this one in a different way...you captured everything so well. However, don't give up in love! Find your missing pieces hun, i believe in you!--5--

God bless
love HMC

Good job, I liked the shortness of the lines with expression.

Great job! I really liked it. It was nicely written. It also had a good flow and managed to rhyme as well! Keep it up.

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This is a really great poem! I can relate to it. Keep it up hun!
Thank you so much for the comments, they meant a lot! :)

Love,
Tiff

This is a really great poem! I can relate to it. Keep it up hun!
Thank you so much for the comments, they meant a lot! :)

Love,
Tiff

another great poem..!

great poem , i loved it

i lke that poem...It's good

Nice poem!!! I added you to my fav. ;)

Definately can relate. Keep your head up. good poem.