LOVE IT. LOVE IT . LOVE IT. 5555

Good poem, i think i get the metaphore about the black blood. I am not sure, but i suppose it is someone with a cold heart or a "bad" feeling about them. It was a good poem and it was feel versed and wonderfully structured.

Five/Five

P.S. I appreciate comments back, good or bad

must agree: it's wonderful:)

Great job, I love it! keep it up, 5/5!

amazing, just amazing, i almost love this one more then "the Dinner Party". It was excellent 5/5. Wonderful Job

this one made me want to read it over and over... very catchy, I like it alot

5/5
david