I really like this.

Beautiful.

Brings tears to my eyes.
This was well written!

5*

Ho-ly shyt...this...poem...Okay it flowed so amazingly well you did extremely well with that. And it didn't follow the cut-n-paste way people tend to write these types of poems either so another thumbs up and hats off to ya. I'm sorry this is a horrible way to say you're poem was brilliant but I'm not really good at the commenting. :))

Beautiful poem,really loved it!!

Thank you. I could never put into words how I truly felt... Amazing poem, strong words...

Absolutely love it!

Well written .

But what's the point in trying
When you are already dead"

I won't say life is really beautiful or try any sort of enlightenment here but I will just say that I agree to every bit of it and the verse reflects my life. I haven't seen much of the world yet but up till now, whatever I have dealt with has led me here.
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All I have to say is
,"Great thoughts well weaved in beautiful lines."

Well written.....loved the overall impact of the poem...really very nice

What a beautiful written piece with a great structure and rhyme that helps keep the flow smooth.
A sad piece full of real powerful emotion that many people can relate to, I do hope hat these feelings are ling gone with when the piece was posted though.

Take care, Em

Wow. Excellent

Rolo, You couldn't say it any better. This priceless poem really hit home. Thank You for sharing a sad but beautiful poem. Keep them coming please.
Ginger

NICE COMPOSITION

Love, love, love this.

Nice

Beautiful