what do you mean that this pome isn't great? i thought it was! seriously. That must have been a good book you read cuz based on your poem it sounded good. I gave it a 5! keep it up!

wonderful poem!! i love it! i missed your poems and of course you! hehe. :)

i liked this one. i love how it flows and i love the word choice.

why don't you think it's that great? i think it's awesome. I'm gonna print this out! it roxs
sammi x

Great can be a very subjective term. There were rough parts, but in general the poem flowed well and had a fabulously dark and almost fae quality to it. I "great"ly enjoyed it.

not that great this poem was awesome 5:) always a great job

Hopeful, angry, regretful...I can see the series of emotions that would cross before this man's expression.
Bravo.

i really liked your poem and i've added it to my favourites!

wow I really liked this.. it was amazing.. nice job I'll give it a ~5~