hey great poem keep up the good work! i know just how you feel..:( this was happening to me and i know it was very sucky. when i read this poem i wanted to cryed too because i know how it feels to go through something like this. well i wrotre a poem too can u plz read it and tell me what u think about it and rate it. thanx.
Hey this poem was amazing & awesome... i loved it...im feeling terrible & miserable as well from a broken friendship that hasnt mended : ( can u spare little time to read my poem "murder or suicide" & tell me wht u think
your poem was swell
u got a 5/5
That was beautiful...absoolutly amazing..i have gone through the exact same thing with someone i was friends with for 15 years(all my life) countless times she has put guys before me completly altering the saying "chicks before dic ks" and the ending of this poem is perfect..ive had to do the same thing n as much as it hurts to throw away 15 years of friendship, she was willing to do the same wen she chose a guy over me..so u really put it into perspective n i do realiz ethat i really do need to just walk away..so i thank you for helping me to realize n not to feel so bad about myself for ending our friendship..anyways amazing poem keep up the good work..always, elisa*..ps, check out my poetry if you have time..goodluck to all you do in life*
OMG ME TOO!!!!!! This axactly happened to except sumtimes i wish we could be friends again and her n her bf r still together. she picked him over me and she thought i liked her in a gay kinda way...aint tht messed up? wutever its been almost a yr since we havent talked, but she always give me that Look like she hates me when ever she sees me in the halls. anyway great job on the poem, totally understand. byeeee
WOW ! this poem DESERVES a 5 ! it really really shouldn`t be a 4.7 ! =( but anyway . i understand exactly what you`re going through . except that this `old buddy` of mine had been a guy . anyway keep up the grreat work =) -niikaa
Fantastic it actually made me figure out wat one of my best friends is doing to us right now but all we can do is write and they dont understand that we write for a reason but i cant write very much cause i dont know wat 2 write about thnx great poem.
Amazing poem! Your flow and rhythm were perfect. And nothin seemed forced. It was so sad yet so beautiful. I can relate to it in many ways and reading this poem almost brought tears to my eyes. Your a great writer and can express your feelings wonderfully. Never stop writing! 5/5
Oh god...i am so sorry taht happened to u...
but sometimes girls get guys over their heads, and their best friend should uncerstand it, and be there to give them another chance...cus when i was reading it i felt like crying when i thought about your fiends...and how she lost everything...like i cnat imagine doing something like she did and then losing my bff...i dont think i owuld be able to handle it....
Aww sweetie, ill be your friend, this had me in tears never mind you lol. its so emotional and its very true about the boys taking over friendship...wrong!!! i love the last line, it puts all the power to you that was taken form you. its fantastic you are in my faves!!! take kare sweetie x x x