I hope it rots...

by Kristin   Feb 20, 2005


We were together for two whole years
And when I think about it I build up tears
The first time we kissed
The first time you left and was really missed...
The first time we did.................
And I really cried
It brought back so many memories
That I'm still having bad dreams
Last wekk you finally called
And afterwards i balled
You told me you were gettin married
I guess these two years have finally been buried...
I hope shes everything I'm not
And as for what I feel for you
I hope it rots!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Kristin

    agh got ya:) your proably right but..lol i dont know i was on the p hone when i wrote it haha! but thanx i appricate it you commentin on it:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    "The first time we did.................
    And I really cried"

    I think something like "the first time we tried..." might help the flow a little and there's a spelling error (wekk instead of week) but apart from those two minor things the sentiment shines through nicely.

    I'll be sure to read and comment more soon.

    Bert

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