i like the way you used caracters to make this poem, thats very creative. Please check out my work and give me any advice that you may have.

wow this is sooo cute, keep up the great work i hope to read more from you, 5 outa 5 keep in touch

hey sexy:) I TOTALLY LOVE IT!!!! you say i have talent, it's nuthin compared to urs:) i really enjoi reading your work truly i do, i wish i was close to you so that i could meet you, just reading your work jsut makes me love you and i don't even really know you... see... i told you, you have some powerful work, making ppl love you , just by writing poems:) oh and tell your mom God bless her for her comment, it really meant alot. well i g2g expect more ratings from me
much love
jay aka jack the pumpkin king