Its excellent! Lol, I do that sometimes, hug my knees and rock to and fro even when I'm not sad, lol. Same for you two! If you need to talk, I'm here!! This poem was fantastic! It may not be one of your best, but it doesn't change the fact that you write fabulous poems!!

Chao, lol, i love that word.

~Sierra

i agree with Distant Fate, that sounds like a good title for it, Greaet poem still hun, keep up the writing, love you xxx

Thanku all.. x

it does, its kool, i like the way u switched the order of the couplets. v kool.
take care,
im always here to talk to,
ellie
xoxoxo

thanku hun! xx