this is really good i wish i'd thought of it but seeems like you've beat me to it

Not a bad poem. I like it to an extent, and it has a nice message, but I don't think its as good as your other work. Just keep writing.

One of your best I've read. Not great but it's good. Keep it up! Take care!
-Conner

Great job, you have really good rhythm in your lines, keep up the great work!

aww you say you aren't an amazing writer but I think you are! Keep it up!
Love Always,
Angel

Awesome poem....keep it up and take care.

Fantastic poem keep smiling and eventually the sun will come shining through the clouds
xx

im amazed by your poems, they are all very good. u have talent, and this one was especially good.
SatuzKa