i like this poem alot although not as much as your other one. 4/5

wow liked how u related cutting to art, made it so visual! great work!
xxx

Great poem, impressively written.
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

p/s

thanks for your comments and votes on my poems

Oh sad poem but greatly written :)

this was so sad, but beatiful and it just is full of emotion and life. I loved it it flowed very well.
Wonderfully done
5/5
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always,
cate

really good nicly put xxxx

It's good. All of my poems on this subject are much more blunt. I love how you didn't come right out and say it.

that was really nice...and super sad lol....but anyways...its another one i could relate to...once again...keep up the good work!

wow i really felt the emotion with this
very well written !!

how sad cool poem

The flow was off alot and there was no real cause to make you feel this hopeless I just felt nothing really. Maybe if you were to show me the pain instead of yust telling me it thats what could be missing...

it was different, but great. I liked how drawing was your premis for cutting. It was a great poem, Im sorry that you cut though. Remember, if you ever need to talk, to vent, just IM me. 5/5