Woah. There's so many lines in this that I adore, omg It's amazing!
I love it hun, really do. Great write.
Hope everything's okay. There's plenty of people around for you to talk to, I'm one of them if you really need me :)
Take care of yourself.
All my love,
Laura.

Very intriguing...I loved the chaos you conveyed in this! Great job~Holly

Great work! Not the usual "Woe is me" suicide poem. THIS, I can handle! Very smooth flowing.

This is a very deep poem. The lines..everything was awesome. You have a talent. I enjoyed. 5/5.

i like this a lot. i like a lot of your poems. keep up the good work.

awesome job. Loved some of the words used in it. >3jess

Sad .yet beautifly written

Beautiful poem, I love the use of the repetitive line
"gun that i should never have loaded"
Greta

Impressive poem.
Sad.
I like the first stanza the most. The rest was also great.
The words, the flow, it was awesome.
Beautiful piece of writing.
Take care!

" thinking till my head exploded
shooting my gun that i should never have loaded "
.. wonderful write... so emotional and so expressive...
beautiful write..

Very good poem. Typically, poem about suicide come across as trite (at best) but this was so well done. Excellent word choice, giving it very entertaining qualities. well done! I really enjoyed this.