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by N J Thornton
Hey nice work. I really liked this poem and the originality. Also welcome to the site! I'm sure i'll be reading more from you in the future.
HEY, GREAT POEM.. IGAVE YOU A 5/5
This poem left me in a state of calmness-good job
by Broken Hearted Immortal
loved it keep up the good work :)
gj luved it 5/5
another awesoqme poem..you have a serious talent
by The Angel of Secrets
another wonderful poem:) You have true talent
Hey, thanks for commenting on my poem. You have talent and imagination. Nice one, James.
I really thought that was a great poem . It flowed well, except this part didn't seem to "fit" in this poem.
falling pieces of soft rain
from the clouds they do Wyne
That kinda threw it off a bit, buy all in all I'd have to say it was still great.
Take care & God bless!