Comments : Million men stong

  • 15 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Hey nice work. I really liked this poem and the originality. Also welcome to the site! I'm sure i'll be reading more from you in the future.

  • 15 years ago

    by Heathergirl

    HEY, GREAT POEM.. IGAVE YOU A 5/5
    MUCH LOVE
    ~*~HEATHER~*~

  • 15 years ago

    by Minkus

    This poem left me in a state of calmness-good job

  • 15 years ago

    by Broken Hearted Immortal

    loved it keep up the good work :)

    ~Xiaoyu~

  • 15 years ago

    by Mexxy

    gj luved it 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by shannon

    another awesoqme poem..you have a serious talent
    love
    shannon

  • 15 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    another wonderful poem:) You have true talent

  • 15 years ago

    by cac123

    beatiful

  • 15 years ago

    by Mel

    Hey, thanks for commenting on my poem. You have talent and imagination. Nice one, James.

  • 15 years ago

    by Tammy

    James
    I really thought that was a great poem . It flowed well, except this part didn't seem to "fit" in this poem.

    falling pieces of soft rain
    from the clouds they do Wyne

    That kinda threw it off a bit, buy all in all I'd have to say it was still great.
    Take care & God bless!