Comments : You were the one

  • 16 years ago

    by Rashelle

    goodjob

  • 16 years ago

    by Broken Hearted Immortal

    nice work dont dissappoint me now james

  • 16 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Godd.........that was gooooodd!!! So sweet, pure, and beautiful!! I loved it! I think it deserves a bit more than a five, don't you think? You described it so accurately, all the symptoms. Though I didn't really like the whole one day thing much. Love is built, not a word to be thrown on a stranger. Just saying, I know it was just a poem, and I did like it, but that was a bit weird to me. Great one James.

    ~Sierra

  • 16 years ago

    by shannon

    wow...you are amazing and under my favorites!

  • 16 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Wonderful poem:) I saw you sat up a post in discussion and said you needed help so... here it is:P
    Great poem... I'll read the rest of your poems too:)

  • Aww that was such a nice poem and so well written. I loved it lol. One problem though
    it ended lol
    5/5
    xoxo