Godd.........that was gooooodd!!! So sweet, pure, and beautiful!! I loved it! I think it deserves a bit more than a five, don't you think? You described it so accurately, all the symptoms. Though I didn't really like the whole one day thing much. Love is built, not a word to be thrown on a stranger. Just saying, I know it was just a poem, and I did like it, but that was a bit weird to me. Great one James.