~ very very lovely write
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

and if I knew this was my last word to say
I would not know what to do

hmm...the other lines were good, but this line somehow doesn't seem to fit. Try something like this:

and if i knew these were my last words to say
i'd say "i love you, you know i do"

that's just a suggestion. Anyway, good poem keep writing.
Satuxxa

Great!!! nice work... please check out my poems..It would mean so much to me.. thanks..5 stars for this poem...

Great poem keep up the good work.

You are such a BEAUTIFUL writer!!
I love ALL your poems! (Iv read all them! lol) Your just so terrific and you know how you feel and how to write your feelings down so well!
I wish i was that good! I believe your poems are so insperational! And definitely from the heart and not your head! I can relate to most of your poems and i sometimes know exactly how your feeling when your writting them! I may not EXACTLY know how your feeling! But with most of your poems i feel as though i do!
Keep it ^! Your terrific!
Love always Paige xoxoxo
Please read some of my poems!
Id really appreciate it! Thanx!

That is so sweet, exactly what i would feel with the one i love

I loved your rhymes and choice of words keep it up!

Equisite. the way you begun each "stanza" with the same line was a perfect touch, and gave the poem a deeper and more longing feel. a brillient work

Ruby