I really really loved this but the buts are killing me in this. The structure of the sentences was hard to follow with the wording but it was good. if you just took abit more time to refine it this would be really well done. Ok i said it sorry if I am butt. Take care just revise please your almost there

I realy like the feeling reading this poem gave me. Not quite sad not quite angry. good work

very good! keep up the good work! thanks alot for the qoute u put on my comment i should really take it in to consideration but for some reason my life just isn't the same with out him even thou he has put me in so much pain. Always believe in love and trust in God! xoxoxo keep up the good work hun!
-Britt

WOW!!! you out did yourself with this poem!!! i wish i were as good of a poet as u but jealousy is not wat i feel in fact i dont know wat i feel

i like this one alot