Comments : Good-bye.

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    awww, this is a wonderful poem marta! i really like it!

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    Wow, this is a really good poem, I really love it, keep up the good work, check out mine if you get the chance, take care =) xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Essence of Blight

    I love it! Very touching! Love yer rhymin too! You have great talent! Keep it up!

    Luye

  • 19 years ago

    by Essence of Blight

    5/5 Indeed

  • 19 years ago

    by Hot_Trav_lover

    great poem a lot of great words used keep it up 5/5 indeed! coment on mine too please bye

  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    this is really deep... sad but deep... also well writen..kepp up the great work..xox Sherrie

  • 19 years ago

    by happy days

    that was an amazing well written poem, the rhymes were great and there was so much emotion, keep it up xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Heathergirl

    THIS POEM WAS VERY DEEP, I LOVED IT...5/5
    MUCH LOVE
    ~*~HEATHER~*~

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    The rhyming and flow in this poem was extremley exquisit! This was just so magically written, take care always <3

    Luffuuls Yew :)
    ;;-- Kalah

  • 19 years ago

    by Kerri

    Marta,

    I felt so much from this poem. PLease never let it get you down that much. I know how you feel but don't EVER go that far, please!! Love ya gurl, and much love--
    ~Kerri anne~

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Perfect flow another exellent poem! I don't think I have read any of ur poems before! I have been missing out! I loved it! Brooke

  • 18 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    WOAH!! so powerful!!! It gave me chills! it really did!...You were and will always be my favorite poet!...I wrote you a long time ago!..but you never wrote back..I'm starting to worry...I just hope this poem isn't true...I hope your okay!..please let me know...just write to say your okay at least...because I'm super worried.
    Take Care and remember...people love you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Melanie

    This poem is so powerfull and mature i loved it good job this is like one of my favorate poems i love your writting and i hope you get better im in the same place with depression and stuff only its cutting great job 5/5 keep writting check out some of mine if you want

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Hey,this was nice.
    I only freaked out because I thought it was true and you were going to die/commit suicide.
    But other than that, it was very deep, and heart-wrenching, which I think it was supposed to be.