This is really good... different and really good...Sherrie

original... I like it.... keep writing and take care xxx

i really liked this it flowed well and i liked ur choice of words. keep it up xxx

i really like this poem and i know what it feels like to like someone then get hurt but still feel something for em..great poem!! :)

Wow, I really love this one, your emotions come out so strongly and I can totally relate. Keep it up xxx