very expressive, i like it!

Great poem ... nice rhyming style and massively* emotional words in this.

Thanks for all of your comments and help, you have been more than an angel to me. <3

Luffuuls yew.
;;--Kalah

Thanx for commenting me =] ... i rele like this p0em ... and u also keep up the good work lol ;]

Thanx ... but i got a question ... wat does PLP mean lol ??

Jackelyn ... ur rele nice lol ... and no its not true .... its actually about my frend .. her dad past away ... but thanx ne way ! =]

Great poem. You can do it! Stay strong. >3jess

Another amazing poem....close to my heart. xxxxx 5/5

I think it needs some touch ups here and there. The rhyme pattern is off. You start off rhyming and then it weakens.

I think the line:
I choose you since you make me constantlyFight for my life

is good but misplaced. It was a good concept.

I don't want to sound harsh because i'm not trying to at all. I"m just trying to tell you how I feel.

I'd give it a 3 1/2only because I give 5's out that I think are perfect poems. I won't rate it because I won't drop your score.

But I'll check out some of your other work :)