Awwww... How beautiful poetry:) Amaing Work! I read your other one and your rate was 2.2 that's not right!! But Don't stop writing! Keep at it!! God Bless your heart!! *5/5*<<--both of the poems I've read!!

-x-Sedusha-x-

Gr8 r u talking abt ur experiences
its good for a beginner
keep it up
stress on the language
rhymes dont matter