thats nice,but sad to,4/5

so sad but totally awsome! this is heaps cool, its a bit short but it dosnt stop the impact the poem makes! excellent! >>5/5<<
bec xXx

thanks for your comment,you to keep up the good work

Wow really powerful another 5 keep writing take care xxx

Thanks for your comment! I love your poem! it's great! Keep it up!

totally awsome! The only thing i found that i think you should change is where you said good-bye you had god bye. Other than that it was great keep it up!

thanks always love suggestions~**~