this is real fun... good work ,,, i like the flow...xox Sherrie

very good.

very good

I like all of ur poems I remember reading some of these already put I liked them so I don't mind reading them again!

That was really something. Another great poem. Although it is short it flows very well. Great work!!! 5/5 =)

Can u plz read my featured poem My Story thanks a lot!!! =)

I think it shows you are talented and unique with your writing. Everybody has a different style of writing and it's great. Keep it up! :)

Aww how cute :D

Nice flow, Great Write

This is a beautiful poem and i really enjoyed reading it. i gave u a 5/5...very beautiful..

Thats very sweet. You expressed true admiration in this poem. Good work.