i like it...good job.

I remember this from your message last night. You said you were embarassed, don't be, because this is lovely.
I really liked these lines,
""Don't do it again"
Just one more incision
It's my only escape
From this dead prison"
the way you described the desperate attempts to cease the addiction through the piece applys to the reader and creates an understanding of the draw back to the razor. i also liked how you stated that this was not what you thought you'd turn out like, "this isn't me" it portrays past events that have lead to this moment and the pain that has traveled with it. Well done darling

Oh my.....what a sad poem. In it's own way it's beautiful though, just because it is unique to the person who wrote it. It's good that you realize that you shouldn't dwell on that one person who broke your heart. Be patient,a nd love will reward you. Keep writing! I love your poems!

~dandy~

Even though the ending may not be true, you have succeeded once again in writing such a powerful and deep poem. You have a great way of writing and reaching people...letting them know they're not alone...so many times before have I been in that exact position yet not because of a broken heart or love....
Keep it up!
mwa!!!

You have an excellent way of writing poems. I loved it.

you know what? i don't know you and i already like you because you don't cut, just becuase you don't get your way! and just trust me, you don't need a guy to make you happy!!!

Hi. I thought that was really good..I write many poems but I don't like to publish them because their private to me...I need help and I was wondering if you would do me a favor...My dad is in jail and I dont know him to well him and my mom broke up when i was 7. If I give you some details do you think you could write me a poem for him...?? I would greatly appreciate it..It is hard for me to write poems about my hurtful memories thats why i mostly write about love and i cant seem to write one about my dad but i just want to send it to him so he knows how i feel...can you email me at SenoritaCDogg84@yahoo.com or just post a comment for me and I will give you the details? I would appreciate it SO much! Thanks!

ive had desprate attempts to cease the cutting i do to my self too...............but any way this was a great poem your talented

This is amazing hun...purely amazing...I'm so sorry that you're in so much pain...I wish that I could take it all away....
As always, I love you
Sammy

wow, it was really good, i liked it a lot!! good job.....check out mine when you have time, thx.
rock on!;)