Comments : The world in which we live

  • 19 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    WOW!WOW!WOW! This is REALLY good! NO JOKE!:) It is so powerful and beautiful yet! I really like all of your poems!
    Love alwayz....
    Haily
    XOXOXOXOX

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachel E F Allen

    A poem is a string of words or sentences that mean something to someone so yes it is a poem to you. Secondly I felt moved, depressed, agitated and sickened by your words. Those feelings are all in a good way although the subject matter makes me feel a little ill. You seem to have experienced something so horrendous and I hope that you find the peace that you desire without having to carry on cutting. You have a way with words that would be better for you to focus all your energies on - just my opinion but I would say keep it up xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    I loved reading this but i do hope that you are ok! It was very deep and wonderful expressions :)

  • 19 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    This is a very powerful, "In-your-face" kind of poem. I liked the style of writing, though I am not a fan of suicidal/cutting poems. But nevertheless, it's a very expressive poem, and it really displays your hurt and anger, some of which I could feel myself...it's important to be able to reach out to your readers like that.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Nothing to say that hasn't been said, well conveyed, and well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    It is a poem, but also not. But it's very good and meanigfull. Great job once again and plz keep writing:)