I like it. Its really good. can u check out mine if u have a chance i'm new so i want to know what people think

Don´t say its not a great poem, cause I think it is. I like that it has a deeper meaning....Its something that goes on every day and I really feel for those people who are the victims!!! Exelent work!

Ups sorry, my spelling is not that good, I spelt excellent wrong =0) Im from Denmark, so hope its okay...

i really enjoyed reading and i thoguht it was really good, thanks for reading mine

this is an awesome poem. I love the message and it flows really well, 5/5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

it was a brilliant poem which was full of meaning and bursting with emotion. i really liked reading it, it gets me thinking of what it does to people. i don;t see how anybody could be so cruel. but your words say it all. its tear jerking. ive just rote a poem on bullying but its crap compaired to yours!
well done luv lucy xx

Yo Katie,
I've seen ur poem a million times but hey it's better each time.
Luv Scarlet/Fran xxxxxxxxxxx