nice poem! i like it, i dont think its weak at all. great work!

Great write Heather. hugs, lol, *Ann*

It was a good poem, but as you said not your best stuff. Trust me...hitmen do have feelings, some of them...but most just choose to ignore them *isn't a hitman but knows one*

I would recommend getting rid of him quickly, they tend to get really attached...very quickly and what is theirs is usually always theirs.

Good job Heather.

it was realy good it wasnt weak i liked it but i agree with Dark Savoir becarfull hunzzz take careee
love yaa
peaceee

I didn't think that was weak at all. I hope you're okay! Take care <33 Erin

That wasn't weak at all... and you know my thoughts on Mr. Skip Tracer! You have a nice sized show of support on this one... See everyone has friends.... although, some people have friends in low places. Or friends in certain interesting states...lol
Later hun.... btw I'm on day turn now.
Aaron

i love it, creative, being involoved with a hitman sounds scary, wouldn't ever want to piss them off of course, just take care, and if someone threaten to kill you i strongly sugest you get out of the relationship if you havn't already because it might end up deadly and that wouldn't be good! take care, your friend, PLP thanks for the comment!

~lil slam~

I don't think this is weak, however I do agree, not one of your best! But I did like the mystery and you always have such an unusual way with words. Love & Peace~Holly